I am a Year 8 student at Kereru Park Campus in Auckland, NZ. I am in Akomanga 3 and my Kaiako is Whaea Lujoe. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi,Jorija I'm Solly from Awahono School. I like how you wrote the words in the colour of the rainbow. Maybe next time you could say what it means in English next to it. How long did it take you to post this on your blog?
Kia Ora My name is Jaeda and I am in Te Waka Ako in Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how you decided to share your Pepeha with us because I love seeing other peoples pepeha to know all about them! it made me think of the time where we made a Pepeha about ourselves and had to share it to our parents and friends! could you think of putting them in English so everyone that does not know Marie can understand the meaning of it. if you would like to see my blog here is my address.
Hi! Jorija My name is Brooklyn and I am a student in Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you used bright colors to make the writing stand out. Have you thought about adding more pictures. If you would like to look at my blog it is athttps://wpsbrooklynl.blogspot.co.nz/
Kiora Jorija, Amaya here from Te Waka Ako in Waikowhai Primary School. I really like your blog post because you used bright colours and the font is easy to read. You post has made me think about when I had to do my Pepeha on our Chromebook and we had to share it with our friends and family. Have you thought about writing your Pepeha in English for those that don't know Maori.
Over all I think you did really well. If you would like see my learning blog here is the address http://wpsamayap.blogspot.co.nz/ comment you later !!!!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi,Jorija I'm Solly from Awahono School. I like how you wrote the words in the colour of the rainbow. Maybe next time you could say what it means in English next to it. How long did it take you to post this on your blog?
ReplyDeleteHi I am Zoe and I like how you did some writing in different colours, like a rainbow.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jaeda and I am in Te Waka Ako in Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how you decided to share your Pepeha with us because I love seeing other peoples pepeha to know all about them! it made me think of the time where we made a Pepeha about ourselves and had to share it to our parents and friends! could you think of putting them in English so everyone that does not know Marie can understand the meaning of it. if you would like to see my blog here is my address.
Hi! Jorija
ReplyDeleteMy name is Brooklyn and I am a student in Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you used bright colors to make the writing stand out. Have you thought about adding more pictures.
If you would like to look at my blog it is athttps://wpsbrooklynl.blogspot.co.nz/
Kiora Jorija, Amaya here from Te Waka Ako in Waikowhai Primary School. I really like your blog post because you used bright colours and the font is easy to read. You post has made me think about when I had to do my Pepeha on our Chromebook and we had to share it with our friends and family. Have you thought about writing your Pepeha in English for those that don't know Maori.
ReplyDeleteOver all I think you did really well. If you would like see my learning blog here is the address http://wpsamayap.blogspot.co.nz/
comment you later !!!!