I am a Year 8 student at Kereru Park Campus in Auckland, NZ. I am in Akomanga 3 and my Kaiako is Whaea Lujoe. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kiora Jorija, My name Amaya and I'm from Te Waka Ako in Waikowhai Primary School. I enjoyed reading your blog post because you had great facts on it. Have you thought about making sure when you take a photo it's clear so we can read it easier. To make it easier to read you could write it down on a doc and take a photo with it? Over-all you did a great blog post If you would like to see my learning blog here is the address http://wpsamayap.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Jorija, my name is Nicholas and I'm from Te Waka Ako in Waikowhai Primary School. I liked how you made a slideshow about Matariki. I also liked how you inserted screenshots. Have you thought about making you screenshot clear? What is your favorite fact about Matariki? Let me know. If you would like to see my blog here it is http://wpsnicholasc.blogspot.com/
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Wow Jorija, there are so many facts about Matariki. Do you celebrate Matariki at home?
ReplyDeleteKiora Jorija, My name Amaya and I'm from Te Waka Ako in Waikowhai Primary School. I enjoyed reading your blog post because you had great facts on it. Have you thought about making sure when you take a photo it's clear so we can read it easier. To make it easier to read you could write it down on a doc and take a photo with it?
ReplyDeleteOver-all you did a great blog post
If you would like to see my learning blog here is the address
http://wpsamayap.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Jorija, my name is Nicholas and I'm from Te Waka Ako in Waikowhai Primary School. I liked how you made a slideshow about Matariki. I also liked how you inserted screenshots. Have you thought about making you screenshot clear? What is your favorite fact about Matariki? Let me know. If you would like to see my blog here it is http://wpsnicholasc.blogspot.com/
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